Shoton (Crystal Element)

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Shoton (Crystal Element)

Post by Hikari Mi on Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:22 am

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Description: The Crystal Release can crystallise any substance, thus, earth, water, and wood techniques are useless against it. Using crystal ninjutsu, the user can crystallise any physical material and even the moisture in the air around them, turning them into a weapon. In the case of human targets, Crystal Release can solidify its targets down to the cellular level, imprisoning and even killing the victim should the crystal ever be struck, reducing the mass of crystal and the victim down to crystalline dust.

The Crystal Release, though powerful, has two known weaknesses, the first being that it cannot crystallise either raw energy or chakra as they have no physical mass to crystallise, allowing a person with either energy-based techniques, such lightning, fire, wind, or good chakra control to properly counter it. The second weakness of Crystal Release is that it is susceptible to a specific sound wave frequency; because crystal requires a very precise build-up of molecules, the proper sound waves can break down the build-up before the crystal can properly form.

Members with this unique Kekkei Genkai usually specialize in using the very powerful Crystal techniques.

Required Element: Shoton

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Clan Techniques:

Ninjutsu:

D Rank:
Crystal Release: Crystal Needles
Rank: D
Description: User creates long, sharp, and pointed bright pink and white crystals that shoot at the target at extremely high speeds with pinpoint accuracy.

Crystal: Hexagonal Shuriken
Rank: D
Description: The User creates more than a few crystal shuriken and launches them at the opponent. The shuriken are six-sided with spikes at the sides of each blade, resembling snowflakes.

Crystal: Hexagonal Shuriken: Wild Dance
Rank: D
Description: The User throws a vast amount of crystal shuriken at their opponent. There is a more advanced form of the attack where crystal particles surround the user and condense into numerous shuriken.

Crystal Armor
Rank: D
Description: This technique allows the user to cover their skin with a thin sheet of crystal, protecting themselves from physical attacks. This armour can also aid the user to perform stronger physical attacks. The crystal is transparent and can only be noticed by light reflecting off it.

Crystal Release: Crimson fruit
Rank: D
Description: The user can create a dome of crystal to surround a target. It is highly durable from both external and internal attacks.

C Rank:
Crystal Release: Crystal Lance
Rank: C
Description: This technique allows user to create a large and sharp spear-like crystal surrounding their forearm, which they can use to impale their target.

Crystal Wheel
Rank: C
Description: With this technique, the user creates a ring-shaped wheel made of crystal around them, allowing them to keep above water and reach a high speed.

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror
Rank: C
Description: The user creates a large mirror in the shape of a snowflake, which they can then use to perform the Jade Crystal Clone Technique.

Jade Crystal Clone Technique
Rank: C
Description: After performing the Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror technique, user can make multiple clones of his or herself emerge from the mirror. These clones are made of crystal, Clones made by this technique are also able to deceive Byakugan users because of the reflective nature of the clone. However by focusing their sight this can be circumvented.

Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon
Rank: C
Description: The user crystallizes a material in the area, and then turns it into a dragon. It can be used as a means to travel or to attack a target. Several dragons can also be made and manipulated at once.

B Rank:
Crystal Release: Crystal Imprisonment Wave
Rank: B
Description: A larger scale version of Crystal Release: Crystal Pentagonal Prison, the user can encase a swarm of opponents in crystal, Unlike other crystal prisons used, where the crystal emerged from the ground, this crystal forms in the air.

Crystal Release: Crystal Pentagonal Prison
Rank: B
Description: User completely encases their opponents in crystal. When the crystal is shattered, the bodies of the victims disintegrate along with the crystal particles. Enemies encased in crystal are covered in frost bite like material, this technique though along with the other encasing jutsu's that try to disintegrate the opponent do take a while to form out their opponent thus giving them a great amount of time to escape the crystal.

Crystal Release: Growing Crystal Thorns
Rank: B
Description: User creates growing thorn-like crystals that they can manipulate to continuously grow towards their target's direction

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Wall Eighth Formation
Rank: B
Description: This technique allows the user to encase a large area in crystal, thus crystallizing everything within it. This technique is usually used to encase a enemy or beast within it.

Crystal Release: The Gods' Crossings Technique
Rank: B
Description: The User places their hand on a surface, creating a long stream of sharp crystals to bind and pierce a target.

A Rank:
Crystal Release: Encampment Wall
Rank: A
Description: The User sends out a wave of chakra which then turns into an almost impenetrable crystal wall which also repairs itself when damaged, weakening it requires the foe to weaken the user or chakra then penetrate the wall.

Crystal Release: Shuriken Wild Dance
Rank: A
Description: The user surrounds themself in crystal particles, condensing them into numerous shuriken which then rain onto the opponent, surrounding themselves in the particles is never ending thus creating a never ending shuriken rain.

Pressure Points or Harm and Death
Rank: A
Description: User can release two Tenketsu points to use String of Glory. This technique does need absolutely concentration for a certain amount of time for the Chakra points to fully be released.

Crystal Release: Crimson Wave
Rank: A
Description: The user sets a hand on the ground creating a reflective Crystal floor on the battlefield, the width and length depend on how much Chakra the user uses when using the Jutsu. If the Crystal is landed on the opponents foot or feet will be encased to the ground.

S Rank:
Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Labyrinth Technique
Rank: S
Description: First the user creates a large number of crystal flowers. Then she can grow these flowers into a gigantic labyrinth consisting of red crystals. Enemies trapped inside it will mostly be lost because of the fact that the red crystals reflect their personal image as well as generates mirror images of the routes, paths, and details within the labyrinth, confusing and intimidating them. It is even capable of confusing the Byakugan because of its reflective nature.
Because of the crystal's stable molecular structure, a simple attack focused at one point is rendered useless, and its wide surface will disperse the force of wide range attacks, reducing their effectiveness. To overcome this technique, an attack that has impact force both wide and powerful is required to smash through it.

Crystal Release: String of Glory
Rank: S
Description: The User encases themself in a prism of crystal. The prism can hover in the air, but seems to be immobile. However, the prism protects the user from almost any attack, as it was capable of withstanding a barrage of continuous ninjutsu, only shattering in the end. In addition, this technique allows them to attack by focusing their chakra into powerful heat blasts launched through the prism's tip.
Special: Can ONLY be used after using the Pressure Points of Harm and Death technique.


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Re: Shoton (Crystal Element)

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Fri Feb 24, 2012 9:42 pm

Crystal Element in general was very OP in the show. I've been trying to think of ways it could be toned down without taking out the whole aspect of it being a CRYSTAL element... Here's some other things I noticed though, without taking into fact the actual power of the elemental control itself. You can encase any enemy within a crystal and kill them? There needs to be some way to escape the crystal prison - even if it is hard to do, there still must be an avenue of escape or a way to avoid the technique. Even Tsukyuomi can be avoided, and it's arguably the most powerful technique allowed on the site (don't look at the Uchiha's eyes - simple enough).

- I'd cap techniques per Jutsu rank to 5.

- Crystal: Hexagonal Shuriken: Wild Dance is just more shuriken than Crystal: Hexagonal Shuriken. I'd take it Wild Dance and add the ability to create more than a few shuriken in Crystal: Hexagonal Shuriken.

- I'd say that Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Labyrinth Technique would probably classify as an S-class, seeing as how it is pretty much the most powerful technique in the KKG.

- "Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Hexagonal Pillars: This technique, which was used for the process of summoning the Three-Tailed Beast, creates five large pink crystalline pillars around the user." Seeing as how I doubt there will be Jinchuurikis in the near future... This is probably useless? I don't see the point in making pillars stand near you that aren't aimed to like smash someone running up to you.

- Crystal Release: String of Glory requires Pressure Points of Harm and Death technique... It's not in your list. What is that jutsu?

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Re: Shoton (Crystal Element)

Post by Hikari Mi on Fri Feb 24, 2012 10:54 pm

I think I would need help finding like a easy way to avoid it or counteract it...maybe the crystal for those two types of jutsu grow on the opponent..like start on a part of their body and slowly grow in time. So that way they can easily counter it and it could only be used when the opponent could no longer fight..you know as like a final move or something.

-I edited the Crystal Release: String of Glory..I swore I thought I but that in there ^^''

-I have just went ahead and deleted the Hexagonal Pillars...I wasn't sure if I needed it or not.

-The Wild dance are small shuriken..while the regular Hexagonal Shuriken is just a bigger and slightly slower version of it.

This is kinda new ^^'' so bear with me please Zeffy hahah I probably seem awful.

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Re: Shoton (Crystal Element)

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Sat Feb 25, 2012 12:42 am

Well, it doesn't necessarily need to be broken apart, but I would like to make sure that it could not be used unfairly against other members. I do like the idea about it growing over time on the body - sort of like an infestation of the crystals. I'd even like to see a technique that pins one limb (most likely a leg) to a surface (most likely the ground). It wouldn't be too bad, because they could probably break the crystal if they knew what they were doing, but you could still use it in a fight.

Of course, my suggestions always get out of hand, as Leon will agree. I'm still waiting on you to take out some jutsu from B and C (a maximum of five jutsu per rank, please). Most clans do not have an entire arsenal of jutsus for their own clan - only about ten or a bit more if they specialize pretty much entirely in their art, like this clan. I'm being very, very lenient because it is a "custom" kekkai genkai, and I don't want to limit your creation too much. Twenty-three jutsus just seems like way too much for me. Razz It's only a few, which bumps it to about just under twenty or so.

Anyways, not to make you do more work or something - I just don't want to edit your post and accidentally leave something out - but I'd also like the jutsus to be listed in the format Jutsus are posted on the site (see the Jutsus board or most of the Clan threads for how I set them up). You have all the information, it's just not in the usual format is all. I like things being neat.

And don't worry about it too much. I've had many an idea shot down or tweaked beyond recognition by others. It just lets you improve. I'm not well experienced in being in this position, either, so we can all learn together. ^^

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Re: Shoton (Crystal Element)

Post by Hikari Mi on Sun Feb 26, 2012 1:46 am

Good ^^ I am learning quite alot. I have fixed a few things but I feel like I left something out! Feel free to look over it one more time and let me know what else I have to fix.

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Re: Shoton (Crystal Element)

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Sun Feb 26, 2012 2:31 am

Looks good now. Approved! 1/2


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