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Post by Alarick on Tue Feb 14, 2012 10:26 pm

Name: Alarick Kikemone
Nickname: Ala-kun, Ala, Ricky
Age: 12
Sex: Male

Village: Sunagakure no Sato
Title: Genin
Rank: D
Element: Fire/Earth
Fighting Style: Ninjutsu Major, taijutsu minor


Personality:
Due to him being completely mute, as in can not speak, he has developed the since of kindness, confusion, and lost-train-of-thought. For some it is hard to think how could anyone have a personality if they can not speak, well Alarick is the perfect example of that. Him being mute has not changed the fact that he is a lovable, cool person. He can always brighten the mood and he is definitely a team player, he will always take one for the team even if it doesn't make sense half the time.

Growing up, Alarick was centered around something most people have and others need, peace. His whole life was peaceful up till the day where he lost his voice. Even then he still managed to at least keep some of the peace in his life still alive. That proves that Alarick can't be so easily broken.



Appearance:

Spoiler:
(Underneathe his uniform)
Alarick has his signature hair style known as the 'M' shaped bangs. basically all it is, is one long bunch of hair on either side of his face with a medium sized bunch of hair dangling down his face tickling his nose. His eye's are purple yet they are intimidating, whenever someone looks into them, they get a cold chill, depending on the person authority level and class rank. He wears this black jacket unzipped with a light burgundy T-shirt underneath. He wears white skinny jean pants with the annual Naruto Black Sandals on his feet.

Apparel/Armour:
Alarick wears the Suna no Sato vest, but other than that, everything on his person is completely his own.

Weapon(s):


Ninja Tools:
Glass Shards-Unlimited Supply



History:

Is it time Already

The boy named as Alarick, was cursed from the start. Well thats what many thought. being born mute would make some peoples life a living hell. Its a cold barren world out there for those with disabilities, but Alarick wouldn't let the nefarious thoughts of such blunt people bring him down. He is far better than that. but being born on the day of a hazardous lightning/thunderstorm made it seem that it was that which took his sound from him, His voice. The screeching of the lighting as it stabbed the ground, and the roar of the thunder as it shook the earth, and then the yelping of the mother in pain as she was giving birth to her second born child. Too many noises all happening at once, and it was all being drained from Alarick as he exited the womb.When he did exit, he was silent. Breathing but silent. The doctors spanked the baby as standard procedure to make him cry, but nothing, it was like he wanted to cry, but even a simple whimper couldn't be made from his voice. It was like he had no voice at all...but then again, he didn't.

Year after year he was cursed with the disability of being mute. How on earth would he ever become a ninja if he can't even speak. How could anything be done in his life if he couldn't give proper direction verbally. Some of these things are better left undone, but that is not how alarick wanted it. He wanted people to look up to him in the village of the sand. he wanted everyone to see his true potential. He wanted to become Raikage. He thought that would be the only way for people to stop treating him like a kid. maybe it would work, or maybe it wouldn't, either way he would not know until....unless he tries to at least.

He went on through the days of the ninja academy. Perfecting his Ninjutsu skills to there ultimate limit. His father promised him that once he became a Genin he will start teaching him the Kikomone Clan's Jutsu's. Did I not mention that before, if I hadn't one thing you need to know is that Alarick is apart of a clan that is famous and world renown for there Glass jutsu's. That was one of the things Alarick wanted to learn the most. The glass jutsu's were extremely powerful. Powerful beyond explanation, not only powerful, but rare as well. not like rare like never seen before but rare like, only a few people have actually learned all of the jutsu's the clan has to offer.

It was then at that very moment when Alarick was finally seeing some light at the end of the tunnel. He was the youngest person on record so far to graduate from the ninja academy. He Graduated at seven years of age, which was the most impressively outstanding since the worlds 2nd most dangerous ninja war. It was clear alarick knew what he was doing as he excelled on to the rank of a Genin with out even taking a seconds breath on the fact that he just became a genin and graduated from the academy.

Love is not always Loyal
It was then when life began to take the toll that Alarick wanted it to. Alarick being a genin and all people still looked down upon him as a kid, a child, some thought of him as a nuisance but still, Alarick still had joy. He would prove to everyone what this mute kid can do when that particular time comes when everyone will need his help, or when the time comes for him to be promoted to kazekage, which ever comes first. But that still doesn't matter because he will wow the people no matter what they think of him.

During his years as a Genin, even though the years seemed short for him because he was soon to be a chuunin, he has mastered and learned a great fraction of the clans jutsu's at an exceptional rate, which indeed was one of the best things that could ever happen to him. but then there is that moment in a persons life were they feel as if they really didn't fulfill anything at all. Even though Alarick was just eight he was feeling that same feeling. But as always he managed to pull through for the better, and just like that he did. He went through the chuunin exams hosted in the Leaf village like it was nothing with his team and everything. They were definitely a force unworthy of fighting because of there strengths.

Just months after the exams started, the results were in and Alarick, along with the rest of his team were promoted to Chuunin, no if's and's or but's and definitely no questions asked. It was just simple years for the boy who couldn't even cry wolf. What glory, bestowed deep within the boys soul as he continued on his journey to become stronger, and strive to become Raikage. But first things first, he would have to prove himself worthy. He was not only known as the mute boy, but he was also known as the one who didn't have kenjutsu as a specialty. At first it never occurred to him. Nearly everyone in Suna was a specialist at the traditional sword fighting, but really to be honest, that did not seem to entertain Alarick in the slightest, it actually made some of his thoughts dull toward the thought of being forced to have kenjutsu as a specialty.

I wouldn't exactly say he was looked down upon now, I mean after all of those years look what he has come to be. Just looking back for a brief moment you would see, that Alarick has graduated the ninja academy at age five, and then passed the chuunin exams at age six. The youngest to do so in many, many years, and plus he now has mastered almost every single jutsu his clan has was something worth bragging about, but he didn't like the bragging part about it. He was just in it so he can completely fulfill his dream, and make his life better than were it already was. his love for conquest and joy flooded his dreams making him Jounin.


Rp Sample:

Akikake, originally Calista Petrakis, was born in the northern region of the Roman Empire. Her father, Petros, had fallen in love with a foreign woman. His family never made an effort to hide their displeasure with the choice. Their prized son, who had served many years in the Roman military, had essentially betrayed his parents. Now that he had impregnated a low-class begger, there was no chance to advance in the society ladder. However, after the two married, the family welcomed them with open arms. They needed their son, and they were going to get everything they could out of him. By the time Calista was born, some of the tension had disappeared. Her grandparents would be seen holding back a smile as they held her in their arms. Often times, her grandmother was found lounging, sewing and singing as Calista and her mother swayed to the music. Other relatives found her cheerful innocence contagious, that very thing doing much to sooth the family's hardened heart.

Not everyone in the household was enjoying the new additions, however. When Petros and his wife was accepted back into the family circle, his older brother, Kleitos, had been pushed to the background. Being able to only look on as his brother took his place as the one to continue the family line...the position that had been rightfully his. The position that had been cruelly taken away from him by one enemy sword. The bitter feeling only grew when another child was born, this time it was a son.

And just like that, Kleitos' status as the "lesser" son solidified.

The only person who knew of his anger and resentment was Calista's mother. She knew of the elder brother's feelings of hatred, and because of this, she feared for her family's life. She ran to her husband, telling him of her worries and of how Kleitos meant them harm. Petros only laughed and thought her delusional. He never thought that at that moment, his brother was pacing the length of his bedroom, plotting his next action. He knew that now that the woman had gone and warned his brother, something had to be done. So, that night he snuck into Petros' room and killed both him and his wife. With the same blade, Kleitos then had no trouble killing the newborn son. As he ran from the murders, he kidnapped the young Calista, heading for the Imperial City of Rome.

There, Calista was sold to a wealthy man, and never saw her uncle again. Her owner, Gaius, was a kind, older man who owned a brothel. His wife had died long ago, and all his children has either married and moved or had died in battles. So, while he had her doing the housework and the cooking, he treated her kindly, and viewed her as his own daughter. However, he failed to mention that that kindness would only last until she grew old enough to develop her curves. Without telling her beforehand, he sold her to a drunk for a high price. Was it any surprise, then, that she knifed the stranger when he tried to take off her clothes?

The incident caused an uproar throughout Rome. Not only was a paying customer killed in a brothel, but a Calista was a female slave with no Roman citizenship. Yet, while others shouted for retribution for the hideous crime that was committed, Gaius saw a chance for profit. He proposed after a week of training with his top gladiator, that she be paired against another woman gladiator for a show. The idea intrigued the people, and she was sent to training.

The week passed fairly quickly, and the day of the fight came. Hundreds of Romans filled the arena, shouting, arguing, and jostling each other for a better view. The two fighters stepped out, and that was when Calista first saw her opponent. A woman only a few years older than herself, holding a broadsword and a large shield. Once the fight started, it didn't last long. With two strides of her long legs, the other woman, batted aside Calista's attempt to cut her, and her broadsword went straight through Calista's stomach. The older woman smirked and then coughed. However, when she saw something red land on other's shirt, she realized something wasn't right. The girl's face featured a grin that stretched from ear to ear. Not even the blood dripping out of her mouth lessened the fear that spread through her. She looked down at her chest, and just stared at it. Pulling her sword out of the older woman's chest, the world spun, and Calista found herself lying on the ground. She didn't even have the strength to remove the sword in her stomach. Yet, she felt a sense of satisfaction. Somehow, she had won.


Jutsu:
•Water Walking Jutsu (D)

•Rope Escape (D)

•Shadow Clone Jutsu (B)






Glass Jutsu's Gaton


Spoiler:

Jutsu Information:
Name:Hari Seisakusho (Glass Works)
Rank:C-D
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:Glass is, frankly speaking, a hard element to come by in nature, putting any Glass Specialist at a severe disadvantage lest he carry around pouches of glass shards around. Glass Works was created for that specific purpose; by combining Chakra with existing sand, the sand is compressed and converted directly into shining glass. In an environment without sand, however, there is a slightly more taxing method of glass creation. The user can change the Chakra inside his body directly into molten glass, and spit it out in a stream to collect in a pile of slag that quickly cools and hardens, becoming available for use.
Base Effect: Can create enough glass for Stage One and Two Glass jutsu.
Stage Two Effect: Can create enough glass for Stage Three and Four Glass jutsu.
Stage Three Effect: Can create enough glass for Stage Five and Six Glass jutsu.

Name:Katsu Kagamiita (Shatter Panel)
Rank:C-D
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:The most elementary form of 'defense' in this arsenal of jutsu, Shater Panel is more of a pre-emptive measure rather than a barrier. A square panel of glass forms up to one meter away from the user. The square is only a quarter of an inch thick, making it ridiculously easy to break and shatter upon solid contact (ie. a punch, not a tap). However, that is the entire point of this jutsu, because once the panel shatters, fragments of glass will likely fall on the person who broke it, perfectly able of giving him/her shallow cuts.
Base Effect: The panel is five feet by five feet in length and width.
Stage Two Effect: The panel is six feet by six feet in length and width.
Stage Three Effect: The panel is seven feet by seven feet in length and width.

Name:Yousei Hokori (Fairy Dust)
Rank:C-D
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description: More of a support technique than truly offensive, Fairy Dust turns a handful of sand into a fine powder of glass (or creates that handful through the second method of Glass Works). The powder can then be blown into an opponent's face to irritate their eyes and, should they breathe it in, probably aggravate their throat into a coughing fit. Shinobi have even used 'Fairy Dust' to coat their weapons, granting them a more abrasive surface while also depositing glass into their enemy's wounds.


Name:Hari Kuuchuukassou (Glass Gliding)
Rank:C-D
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:The user forms a layer of glass beneath his feet, coating it with a small amount of Chakra to reduce the friction so that it's as if the user is skating on ice when on regular ground. What makes this a handy jutsu is that the Chakra coat softens any noise of movement from the feet, allowing for quick travel while maintaining a high level of stealth.
Base Effect: The 'skates' can be maintained for five posts.
Stage Two Effect: The 'skates' can be maintained for seven posts.
Stage Three Effect: The 'skates' can be maintained for nine posts.

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Name:Hari Kawarimi (Glass Replacement)
Rank:C-D
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:A more potent variation of the standard Replacement technique, instead of switching spots with a nearby object, the user leaves behind a glass statue of their likeness. The model shatters easily, which can leave minor gashes on an opponent who happens to get caught in the outward burst of jagged shards. This, like any other Kawarimi technique, can only be used twice per thread (by itself or in combination with another Kawarimi technique).


Name:Wareyasui (Fragile)
Rank:C-D
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description: A weapons technique that requires a sacrifice on the user's behalf, Fragile takes a weapon already in the possession of the user (if the user has disarmed and stolen an opponent's weapon, he/she must have the owner's permission) and turns it entirely into glass. While completely useless in terms of defense, the glass weapon will break into scores of pieces on its first hit. This effect has made Fragile a popular technique for use on kunai and shuriken; if the opponent were to block one of the glass projectiles, it would then shatter and spray the razor fragments onto him/her, quite possibly cutting and sticking into his skin. Once the user turns an armament into glass, though, it cannot be changed back.

Name:Hari Densouro (Glass Link)
Rank:C-D
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description: Communication is vital in a team but sometimes simple, standard issue comm. units just don't cut it. Glass Link creates a two slabs of glass small enough to fit inside a pocket comfortably. One of the two is usually given to a partner (unless the user really likes talking to himself) because the two pieces of glass can communicate with one another as well as with other communicator units. All one must do is focus Chakra into the object and think about the owner of the other slab; the matching piece begins to grow warm to signal to the partner that he is being called. The two can speak amongst one another through their frames of glass. Both visual and audio is provided, and the sound is even tunnelled via Chakra so that only the bearer of the slab can hear what the other is speaking. These have twice the range of the regular comm. unit that most Shinobi employ and last about a week before crumbling into useless pieces. Glass Links created by Jounin have thrice the range of a comm. unit.


Name:Giragira Tekidan (Glare Grenade)
Rank:C-D
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:Flashbangs are a most useful tool within a Shinobi's equipment, but sometimes one forgets to bring them along, or simply lack the space in his inventory to pack them. Glare Grenade is a simple, but effective, substitute. By creating a single, hand-sized, blunt-edged square of glass, the user can throw it into the air and, if there is sunlight (a sunny day; overcast with limited sunshine does not suffice), the glass will reflect the rays into the opponent's eyes and blind them for a few moments, just like a flashbang. If the user is indoors or it's dark outside, he can send a pulse of Chakra into the glass to create his own glare, but this has only half the strength of a regular flashbang and thus can prove to be much less effective in practical use.


Name:Hari Tetsubishi (Glass Caltrops)
Rank:C-D
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:Caltrops can be a deadly weapon when used strategically. By slamming both palms to the ground, the user can cause miniature glass spikes to rise an inch from the ground. These are sharp enough to actually pierce through the rubber soles of Shinobi sandals to hit the soft flesh of feet. The power of this jutsu is increased by its second effect: the spikes will drill themselves into whatever they have pierced, so it's possible that an opponent (or an ally, the effect does not discriminate between friend and foe) will find his feet riddled with glass.

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Name:Hari no Yoroi - Karui (Armour of Glass - Minor)
Rank:C
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:This jutsu creates a set of most basic armour for the user. Two inch thick plates of glass adorn the user in various locations: forearms, biceps, shoulders, torso/back, thighs, and shins. This armour, though, leaves much to be desired as the weight of the glass itself can become burdensome after some time, while there are plenty of chinks between the plates to attack. Each plate can sustain...
Anything higher than those will not only punch right through the plate, but also present a danger to the user since glass shards could embed themselves in the limb they once shielded

Name:Kirameki Tama (Glitter Shot)
Rank:C
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:Glitter Shot, when employed by the right hands, can prove to be a very damaging move. The user creates several shuriken or kunai (but not a mix, only one of the two) of glass. These projectiles can either be thrown by hand or through Chakra. What puts this technique above all other minor elemental projectile jutsu is that, when under the beams of light (or by pulses of Chakra, but is less effective), the weapons will shine and flare, creating bursts of glare that make them difficult to look at and thus, harder to defend or evade.
Base Effect: Two projectiles are created.
Stage Four Effect: Three projectiles are created.
Stage Five Effect: Four projectiles are created.


Name:Hari Honryuu - Karui (Glass Torrent - Minor
Rank:C
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:The counter part to the infamous Suna Shigure (Sand Shower), Glass Torrent - Minor creates a mass of jagged glass bits which can then be directed in a straight line at a target. The stream of shards cannot be guided or have its direction altered once started, but the torrent moves at a fairly quick speed (the user's Control equals the stream's Speed) and with a fair amout of strength (the user's Power equals the stream's Strength).
Note: The Strength/Speed levels are according to the user's rank.
Base Effect: Ten fragments are created.
Stage Four Effect: Twenty fragments are created.
Stage Five Effect: Thirty fragments are created.

Name: Kesshousei Seikei (Crystalline Cast)
Rank:C
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:After forming the required handseals, the user can spit out a stream of molten glass. Unnaturally cool to the touch, the target of the viscous material is to hit an opponent's arm or leg. From there, it will harden almost instantaneously around the limb to hamper movement. To have a hand restricted by this technique would be disastrous as it would render a target unable to properly form handseals. If affecting a leg or foot, the glass usually fuses with the ground as well to root the target to the spot. This jutsu has even been known to form makeshift casts and splints on allies. The Crystalline Cast lasts for two posts before dissipating, but can be broken prematurely by a base Strength of 12 (willing targets have no duration).
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Name:Hari Kumo no Amimono (Webs of the Glass Spider)
Rank:C
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:This jutsu is the first to utilise both the burning and cooling effects of molten glass. Building up Chakra in his throat, the user will spew forth spherical globs of molten glass that are roughly the size of a softball. The spheres will travel in a straight line and, upon the user's command, burst outwards, sending tendrils to catch up any solid surface within twenty feet (otherwise the tendrils will fall harmlessly to the ground) and adhere to it by cooling quickly. What this does it make a giant 'web' of hot, molten glass; if something were to run into it, not only would they be scalded (first degree burns) by the high temperature, but the 'webbing' would then cool and fuse itself to the fabric of the victim's clothing and skin and caught as if they had run into a giant spider web. If a spherical glob hits an object, it will still burst outwards, but this time sending the extensions all around to wrap up the target and then proceed to harden. The webbing, though, will lose its strength after a set period of time...

Chuunin vs Genin : Genin will be trapped for two posts.
Chuunin vs Chuunin : Chuunin will be trapped for one post.
Jounin vs Genin : Genin will be trapped for three posts.
Jounin vs Chuunin : Chuunin will be trapped for two posts.
Jounin vs Jounin : Jounin will be trapped for one post.
Sannin vs Genin: Genin will be trapped for four posts.
Sannin vs Chuunin: Chuunin will be trapped for three posts.
Sannin vs Jounin: Jounin will be trapped for two posts.
Sannin vs Sannin: Sannin will be trapped for one post.

The web can be broken earlier if the target's Strength or Power is greater than the user's Power. Also note that when under the light, the glass web will sparkle and shine, making it easy to see. In the darkness, though, it becomes exponentially more difficult to notice until it's too late.

Name:Hari no Yoroi - Juuyou (Armour of Glass - Major)Special Requirement: Armour of Glass - Minor
Rank:C
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:The upgraded form of of AG - Minor, AG - Major creates a two inch layer of molten glass all over the user but does not harm him. Rather than deflect or stop attacks, the layer will simply absorb the force of the blows, which can be seen as the rest of the 'armour' will ripple. If anybody but the user were to touch it, though, they would be burned painfully (first degree). The armour can protect up to a base Strength of 18 and Ninjutsu up to Stage Two. If an opponent is a Taijutsu Specialist and attacks, his strike will go through the layer (but still be burned) to contact the user beyond. The main drawback of AG - Major is that the molten glass is constantly shifting, distorting not only the appearance of the user, but in his perspective, anything outside of the armour. This makes it difficult to see details of things, blurring objects together (ie. if the opponent threw five kunai together, the user would not be able to discern how many were thrown).


Name: Jigoku Suiiki (Hell Waters)
Rank:B
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:A devastating jutsu when poured on, Hell Waters requires the user to build up Chakra in his throat and mouth. Exhaling, a veritable river of molten glass will come from the user's mouth. Surging forwards for the user's Control in feet, the sluggish liquid (two feet in diameter) will scorch anything in its path, even setting things like paper and leaves on fire. Although unable to kill on first contact, if one were to be caught within the current of the molten glass and remain there, death could be a possibility, if not mutilation at the very least by second degree burns because of the immense concentration. After one post, the glass will cool and harden, setting in place and binding whatever has been caught within.

Name:Kyuuten no Ikari (Anger of the Heavens)
Rank:B
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:After finishing the handseals for this jutsu, large boulders of glass will rise into the air and hover, glittering in the radiant light of the sun. The user can command the boulders to fly towards a target with enough force break themselves on contact, fracturing the unfortunate victim's bones; even a glancing blow can result in vicious bruising. The boulders can be shattered into little blocks by a base Strength of 15.
Base Effect: One boulder is created, roughly three feet in diameter.
Stage Five Effect: Two boulders are created, roughly four feet in diameter.
Stage Six Effect: Up to four boulders are created, roughly four feet in diameter.
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Name:Koukiaru Kabe (Shine Wall)
Rank:B
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:With this jutsu, the user creates a wall of glass to protect himself. The wall is rather durable being five inches thick, standing at ten feet in height and spreading seven feet in width. The barrier can be created in any position: To the front, behind, under, even above the user, making it an extremely versatile, though stationary, defense. It would take a base Strength greater than 20 to crack and break the wall in two hits while a base Strength greater than 23 would bring it to the ground in one. Ninjutsu up to Stage Three can be repelled with ease, but one Stage Four Ninjutsu would bring the wall to destruction. A tricky ability of the barrier, though, is that with a single surge of Chakra via physical touch by the user, the side opposite to the user will produce an intense glare akin to two flashbangs. However, this expends the duration of the Shine Wall and destroys it immediately afterwards. This can only be done once per thread, no matter how many Shine Walls are created.


Name:Kagirinai Hyou (Eternal Ice)

Rank:A
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description: Glass has sometimes been described as 'unmelting ice', in other words, 'eternal ice', exactly from which this technique claims its name. After completing the seals and slamming a palm against a solid surface, a giant spike of glass will burst from whatever patch of that surface the user can see with his own two eyes, typically underneath an opponent.


Name:Hari Midika (Glass Familiar)

Rank:A
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:Glass Familiar is a unique cloning kind of jutsu. Instead of creating a clone of the user, Glass Familiar summons forth a glass creature of nature. The beast can be no bigger than a bear in size, and no smaller than a hare. The creature possesses the full stats of the user, with two thirds of the user's Taijutsu bonuses (if the user knows a Taijutsu style). It cannot perform Genjutsu or Ninjutsu. Although unable to speak, the animal is able to communicate perfectly with its creator, but not anybody else. One solid hit will destroy the beast with ease. A user can only have one in existence at a time.
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Name:Mure no Kyouran (Fury of the Swarm)
Rank:A
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:One of the more potent jutsu in the Glass arsenal, Fury of the Swarm has been known to end many a fight in the past. Creating ten marble sized balls of glass at the end of each fingertip, the user then fires them all at once towards the target. Keep in mind that looks are deceiving. Although they are only marble sized, each sphere is actually half a ton of glass compressed via Chakra into that one, small space. The ten orbs will then split into two each (softball size) for a total of twenty, surrounding the opponent before exploding in a shower of glass senbon. While extremely difficult to defend against, it is a difficult jutsu to pull off and is rather taxing on the user.


Name: Amatsugoten no Zanchuu (Pillars of the Imperial Palace)
Rank:A
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:A mix between offensive and support, this jutsu creates a large pillar from a solid surface through contact. The pillars can be employed to lift the user above the battle scene and avoid an attack, or even throw themselves in front of the user as a defense. When a pillar breaks, it explodes outwards in a storm of glass shards at everybody within three meters, even the user. The pillar can sustain attacks up to and including 25 base Strength and Ninjutsu up to Stage Four. If a rushing pillar were to hit an opponent, he could sustain severe injuries amounting to broken bones and even internal bleeding. A few unfortunate victims have even been crushed to death between two oncoming pillars from opposite directions, reduced to nothing but a flat, human pancake.

Name:Eikshou Ryuu Bakufuu (Molten Dragon Blast)
Rank:A
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:Perhaps one of the most feared Glass techniques in existence, this jutsu's power can rival that of Katon: Karyuu Endan. Molten Dragon Blast is capable of altering, even destroying the landscape. By concentrating a great volume of Chakra in the throat, the user then spits out a massive torrent of molten glass. The liquid is hot enough to melt human flesh, radiating enough heat in the general area for first degree burns if one wasn't careful. The giant stream surges forwards as far as fifty feet, the front waves taking the form of a dragon's head and gaping maw. Those who are caught unawares in its path are either killed by the sheer weight or the hellish temperature. In two posts, the glass eventually cools and hardens, trapping and suffocating anybody who incredibly managed to live that long after being hit. Molten Dragon Blast can only be done twice a thread. A third time could, conceivably, be executed, but would exact so much Chakra that the user would die after the third

Name:Eikshou Ryuu Bakufuu (Molten Dragon Blast)
Rank:A
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:Perhaps one of the most feared Glass techniques in existence, this jutsu's power can rival that of Katon: Karyuu Endan. Molten Dragon Blast is capable of altering, even destroying the landscape. By concentrating a great volume of Chakra in the throat, the user then spits out a massive torrent of molten glass. The liquid is hot enough to melt human flesh, radiating enough heat in the general area for first degree burns if one wasn't careful. The giant stream surges forwards as far as fifty feet, the front waves taking the form of a dragon's head and gaping maw. Those who are caught unawares in its path are either killed by the sheer weight or the hellish temperature. In two posts, the glass eventually cools and hardens, trapping and suffocating anybody who incredibly managed to live that long after being hit. Molten Dragon Blast can only be done twice a thread. A third time could, conceivably, be executed, but would exact so much Chakra that the user would die after the third use.
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Name:Amatsugoten no Juzou (Statues of the Imperial Palace)
Rank:SS
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:Some say that this jutsu is done to the most terrible of traitors against Sunagakure, to show all in the village what becomes of those who turn against those of sand. Concentrating an awesome amount of Chakra into one palm, this takes one post of preparation before its actual use where the user may not attack or defend due to the enormous focus required. The next person or object that the user strikes with that one palm will then gradually and inexorably 'freeze' over until it/he/she is nothing more than a glass monument.


Name:Kouten no Nagareboshi (Meteor of Heaven)
Rank:S
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:Meteor of Heaven is a horrifying jutsu used only in the most absolute dire straits; the technique is normally forbidden because of its unrivaled pernicious potential. Sacrificing a great portion of Chakra, the user can part the skies and call down a shining meteor of glass. While falling from the stratosphere, the meteor breaks up into four house sized chunks that, when crashing to the ground, can cause tidal waves of earth so that even if one managed to evade the colossal boulder, the titanic shockwave of the impact would break bones and cause ears to bleed. Anything in a fifty foot diameter would be devastated.


Name: Hari Honryuu - Juuyou (Glass Torrent - Major)
Special Requirement: Glass Torrent - Minor and Raikage's Training...
Rank:S
Range: Mid Range
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:Much like the lesser version, GT - Major differs in that it creates actual three foot lances of glass. The lances, through hand gestures by the user - which means other jutsu cannot be used while GT - Major is in effect - can be guided and directed through the air in a stream to hound after the target. The lances can penetrate up to and including Stage Five defensive jutsu and, when the user closes his palms into fists, explode with half the force of an explosive tag. Shards of glass are sent flying in every which direction, so even the user must be extra careful not to be in proximity when this happens. The technique creates a monstrous forty lances. Note that when once lance is destroyed by a defensive or counter offensive means, it explodes as if the user had willed it. The rest of the lances can continue on, but as soon as the user chooses to detonate, all of them detonate at the same time.

Name:Amatsu-ou no Tenjoukai Ensei (Celestial Garden of the Imperial King)
Special Requirement: Eternal Ice Explosion
Rank:S
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Kikemone
Element Affinity: Glass release: Gaton

Description:This kind of jutsu has only ever been used once, ages ago, so many years past that only scrolls depict the nature of the technique. Few people know how to use it, and even fewer people have actually used it for most fear the awesome, earth-altering effect of the jutsu. Using up the majority of his Chakra, the user will slam both palms to the ground. A ripple of Chakra is sent out in all directions for a hundred and fifty feet and after a few moments, everything becomes glass. Trees, animals, buildings, everything short of Shinobi (because of their own Chakra, which retards the initial wave that was sent out by the user) is frozen within glass into an eerie tranquility. Of course, the power of this jutsu is that it blocks off an opponent's access so his own element, affecting those based on the earth most heavily. The glass itself is impenetrable and hard to walk on without slipping (though training through Kinobori/Kabenobori does help significantly). The effects of the jutsu wears off after several years; civilians caught and suspended are awoken and feel as if nothing had ever happened, never aware of the fact that they'd been imprisoned for all that time.

Katon Jutsu List(For Later use and please look over the list if you may)

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Name:Katon • Kasai Sanshuhouuo no Jutsu [Fire Release • Fire Salamander]
Rank:B
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:A skill in which generates a lot of flame, creating a large salamander approximately three feet tall and eight feel in length. This Salamander can be commanded by the user to rush off and attack the opponent, and will track the opponent as best it can. The intelligence of the entity of flame however is not very high, but when taking 50 dmg or more, it explodes.


Name:Katon • Karyuu Endan [Fire Release • Fire Dragon Napalm]
Rank:B
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:A skill in which has been considered one of the most powerful streaming fire jutsu. The user gathering up a great deal of chakra within their chest, condensing it and focusing it at the same time. Letting it flow out into the world, bursting forth into a grand stream of flame. This powerful stream having such a flying force that it can repel projectiles that get in its way. This attack flies very fast, and is considered hard to dodge without the use of supplementary jutsu.

Name:Katon • Hibashira no Jutsu [Fire Release • Pillar of Fire Skill]
Rank:B
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:A skill in which the user gathers their chakra through the ground, aiming it towards their opponent. If used upon a stationary opponent this jutsu can very easily be used. Shooting up a powerful pillar of flame from the ground which surrounds the opponent. The opponent in side is burned mercilessly during the time they are within it. This jutsu is a self-sustaining jutsu, so even if the attack does not hit it can be used as a tool to throw your opponent at for damage.

Name:Katon • Kouen Dakou Kahan [Fire Release • Flaming Crawling Seal]
Rank:B
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description: A skill in which some have almost considered a fuuinjutsu due to its nature. Gathering chakra within their hands, the user imbues it with the fire element and rush towards the opponent. Upon touching the bare skin of the opponent, the chakra slowly flows over into their skin diffusing outwards leaving a series of burn marks. These burn marks make it very hard to utilize the limb or body part(s) effected.

Name:Fire Release • Katon Bunshin no Jutsu (Fire Release • Fire Clone Skill)
Rank:B
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:A skill in which creates a tangible clone of flame. With this skill, the tangible clone of flame acts freely and upon its own will. It will attack the opponent as best it can, trying to prompt the opponent to attack it from close range. When the clone is struck, its body turns into its true form being a mass of flame. When the opponent hits this mass of flame, it causes damage along with some terrible burns.

Name:Katon • Nenshou Hai Machi no Jutsu [Fire Release • Burning Ash Road]
Rank:B
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description: A skill in which is used as a feint to trap the opponent. First performing the handseals and running away from the opponent. Prompting them to rush and catch you as you are running. During that time, as the user runs the chakra from their feet transforms into an ashy and very flammable substance. When the opponent steps onto the trail the user can then ignite the Ash for a powerful explosion. The jutsu can also be used to create ash that can be blown at the opponent.


Name:Katon • Gouka Dakatsu no Jutsu [Fire Release • Hell Fire Serpent Skill]
Rank:A
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description: A skill which is known as one of the most difficult fire based ninjutsu to learn. The user releases forth a flame from their mouth, as it materializes into a very large snake type shape. The snake has a three foot diameter and is twenty feet long, and rushes at the opponent. The key danger factor of this jutsu is that, the user can change the direction of the attack at their discretion essentially making it a homing type jutsu.

Name:Katon • Kasai Uzu Nami no Jutsu [Fire Release • Fire Spiral Wave]
Rank:B
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description: A skill in which the user taking their chakra from their hands and slamming it into the ground, performs a swinging motion in the direction of choice. This sends up a wave of flame with spiralling flames that emerge from the central wave that is sent out. This spiral waves extend out three feet from the wave, the initial wave being twelve feet wide.

Name:Katon • Baku Ho Bunshin No Jutsu [Fire Release • Explosive Fire Clone]
Rank:A
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description: A skill where the user gathering their chakra into a Fire Clone, can now make that same clone imbued with an effect that will cause them to explode. Normally the normal fire clone would just burst into flames when struck, this clone explodes outwards in a powerful blast of flame. / Minimum of 100% chakra, costs 35% of your current chakra within a reserve.

Name:Katon • Kanatsu [Fire Release • Ember]

Rank:B
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:A skill in which is often considered the beefed up version of the Grand Fireball skill. Taking in alot of chakra into their chest cavity, and thrusting their hand before their mouth. The user breathes forth the flame, and upon flowing out of their hand it expands outwards creating a powerful burst of flames.
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Name:Katon • Kasumi Enbu No Jutsu [Fire Release • Mist Waltz Skill]
Rank:A
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description: A skill in which utilizes a strange form change. Taking the surrounding air and firing it off as a strange combustible mist towards the opponent. Either using the natural fire within the area, or creating fire creates this large explosion of fire capable of burning multiple opponents within a thick blaze of flame.

Name:Katon • Kaen Heki Gan no Jutsu [Fire Release • Flame Burst Sphere]
Rank:A
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:A skill in which a large ball of flames is created within the air in an orb like shape. Condensed together and infused with a great deal of chakra. When the ball slams down against the ground, it creates a widespread blast of flames.

Name:Katon • Yuutename no Jutsu [Fire Release • Melting Rain Skill]
Rank:A
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:A skill in which is one of the most difficult fire based jutsu to master. Within the sky fire chakra is imbued into the sand from the user. From these sand, it begins to rain down a series of burning embers. Encompassing the nearby area or a potentially long range target in a rainfall of fiery embers. This skill can also be dangerous to the user.
[Note this does not affect a widespread area, it attacks a radius of 25 feet with this rain]

Name:Katon • Nanatsu Kyuuten [Fire Release • Seven Heavens]
Rank:A
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:A skill in which the user taking their chakra and imbue it with their flame chakra. The user will then spit out the flames towards the opponent, at first taking the form of a large burst but then splitting off into seven distinct fire spears. These spears capable of even breaking through many high level shield jutsu. Each spear is 10 feet in length.

Name:Katon • Karyuudan No Jutsu [Fire Release • Fire Dragon Skill]
Rank:A
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:A skill in which is noted for being a rather difficult ninjutsu to learn. The technique causing a great deal of flames to encircle the opponent, launching up into the air and combining together. Heavily infused with the users chakra, materializing a large dragon shape. This dragon having a diameter of four feet, a large head, a wing span of twenty feet, and arms that extend five feet. This technique considered the brother of the Hellfire Serpent, cannot be manoeuvred by the user however its power is much greater.

Name:Katon • Haisekishou [Fire Release • Burning Ash Accumulation]
Rank:A
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description: A skill which will spew forth a strange ash from the mouth, it covers a wide range around the opponents body. Blinding the opponent for a few moments, also providing a chance for the opponent to accidentally breath in the ash. After a few moments, the ash will then combust into a powerful flame entrapping the opponent.

Name:Katon • Shouten Kaen Tama no Jutsu [Fire Release • Focus Flame Shot]
Rank:A
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:A skill in which, has the key ability for one to focus their chakra to the level of B rank. Performing the first handseal, and holding the second one for as long as they focus their fire chakra. Streams of heat will flow off the hands, as the user pushes their hands forward. Releasing a powerful fast flying shot of flame, so powerful that it is capable of levelling an entire house.


Name:Katon Hidora no Jutsu "Fire Release: Hydra Technique"
Rank:A
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:A variant of the Katon Ryuuka no jutsu, this one has the same function, only tripled. Instead of one stream of fire that advances towards the opponent, the user is capable of exhaling three at the same time, although all still vary from each other at only a slight degree (meaning that they can only be used against enemies that stand close to each other and not at different directions). The 3 streams look like 3 snakes, and that's where the jutsu got its name.

Name:Katon: Daitou no Jutsu "Fire Release: Longsword Technique"
Rank:A
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:Similarly performed as compared to the Katon Kyuuka, the user instead focuses all heat around them onto their skin. Then, by molding chakra in the most precise manner they are able to turn their entire arm, the most dominant usually, into a long, flaming sword. It shoots out from the arm and remains there for a few moments, incinerating anything it touches. Comprised of the same sort of heat given off by the Kyuuka, it is basically amplified to the point where it can be used offensively. If it used longer than a minute (one post) the user's arm will be singed

Name:Katon: Kudakasei no Jutsu "Fire Release: Shatterforce Technique"
Rank:A
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:Built upon the principles of Katon: Myaku Hitofuki no Jutsu, this technique instead acts as a much more powerful, centralized version. Gathering heat in between both hands the user focuses it until it cannot be condensed further. Manifested as a sphere of raw, glowing energy it is at first held at bay as if only for show. Then, given any cue, the user slams the sphere into the ground, causing it to explode with the power of pure heat behind it. The user is unaffected by this burst of power, but anyone within the radius of the blast suffers some unsettling consequences alongside the devastating concussive force it sends forth.

Name:Katon Yurika no Jutsu
"Fire Release: Fire Lily Technique"
Rank:A
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:Comparable to the Katon Housenka no Jutsu but different still, this technique is obviously kept within only the most seasoned shinobi of the Leaf. Breathing in and expanding their lungs to an almost impossible size, the user breaths out gigantic fireballs (of comparable make and strength of the Katon Goukakyu). A highly draining technique, it more than makes up for the chakra consumption in potency. Entire engagements have both started and ended with this one technique, easily felling multiple enemies in one ferocious attack.
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Name:Katon: Shinhidora no Jutsu
"Fire Release: True Hydra Technique"
Rank:S
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:An extremely powerful technique, used only by the most powerful of Leaf-nins, it has been known to destroy entire landscapes in one fell swoop. By somewhat summoning a large, fiery monstrosity in front of them: a Fire Dragon with three heads, the user is able to fire three Katons equal in strength to the Karyuu Endan at three different targets, or all at one.

Name:Katon: Oorashi no Ryu
"Fire Release: Raging Storm of the Dragon"
Rank:S
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:An extremely powerful technique that tests the physical limits of the user, it is the mark of a true Katon Master. Using all methods of heat creation and transferal, the user channels chakra all over their body and dramatically bends forward, their back hunched and aimed upward. Then, slamming their crossed arms onto the ground in from of them, firmly planting both palms on the ground, the user erupts in a blazing column of impenetrable flame. What the rego vita is what can only be described as a funnel of pure fire. Designed to be used defensively over all else, the fire as well takes different form as floods of chakra meant to reinforce the technique discolor it. Purple, blue and red all at once, this funnel surrounds the user completely and has obvious effects: anything that makes contact with the user during this technique becomes instantly enflamed, and such force by the chakra launches it back.

Name:Chikei no Naraku no Jutsu [Terrain of Hell Technique]
Rank:S
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:After a very long series of handseals, the user holds the Dragon seal. As the user stands in one spot, the ground within 100 meters of his or her body will begin to ignite. As larger and larger fires start, they will begin to spread outward from the original location, always traveling away from the user. Eventually, the fires created by this jutsu will become raging infernos, eating away at anything and everything in their path. This jutsu can cause devastation to any environment, as the flames are spread by chakra, and not any type of physical fuel such as grass.

Name:Katon: Gouryuuka no Jutsu [Flame Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique]
Rank:S
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description: (Requirement)Katon Yurika no Jutsu
"Fire Release: Fire Lily Technique"
After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete or pierce through a forest burning a long line of trees. Being such a powerful and draining jutsu, this technique can only be performed once per battle by the strongest of ninjas.

Name:Katon: Mori no Ho Kami [Fire Release: Lance of the Fire God]
Rank:S
Range:Long
Type of jutsu:Ninjutsu
Exclusive to:Alarick
Element Affinity: Fire release: Katon

Description:After a long series of handseals, the user opens his or her mouth. A small ball of flame appears in front of his or her mouth, no larger than a golf ball. A loud whistling sound can then be heard near the user. After a few seconds, the ball will burst forward into a small stream of fire. It bursts forward with enough force to punch holes through trees. The stream extends forward 100 meters before ending it's burst. Once the stream reaches 100 meters, it remains for 3 seconds.

Kekkei Genkai:
This clan has the Gaton Release. Gaton is Glass and can not be copied by the Sharingan, and also it can counter act the Byakugan by making the user of the Byakugan see multiple images of themselves if they where to activate it or look at the ninja if he or she used their mirror armor. Also, beginners of this clan have to have a bag of glass shards with them, or else they can't use any of there jutsu's, but if you are and expert or foresay mastered the clans jutsu's then you can form glass out of thin air.


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Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Wed Feb 15, 2012 7:53 pm

I wasn't really prepared for anyone to actually sign up yet, but I'll check over it and tell you what I see is up with it, I suppose.

Sunagakure is the Sand Village - yet in your Bio you wrote that he is a Cloud ninja. Are you a Sand or a Cloud shinobi?

Jounin start at B rank, by the by. Also, Custom characters start at Genin. Sorry, it's just how the site goes.

Sannin isn't an actual rank. In the show, it was just a title given to the three youngsters (Tsunade, Jiraiya, and Orochimaru) that put up a good fight against the Raikage(?). It's not in any other village, and the title Sannin won't have any place on this site, really.

Your clan would have to first be approved by an application (that is not posted yet - sorry, we're working on getting everything up) in the Custom Clans board, but preliminary reports say that it won't be approved. Can nothing counter it?

The jutsus - without putting much thought into powerfulness - seem fine-ish at the moment. I saw quite a few of those Katon jutsus, and they're already on the list to get put onto the generic lists for Katons. Please take out the canon jutsus from that list, and maybe you'll be able to submit the custom ones later for approval. Also, that's a ton of high-powered jutsus that only you're able to use, even though it seems like anyone else could use them if they had an affinity for the Fire element. ALSO: FIVE S-ranked jutsus? Geez man, I was thinking that people could only have a few S-ranked. You should probably take some of them out; not that I want to limit your creativity, it's just that S-ranked jutsus are rare, powerful, and hard to learn. Knowing 5 would be a difficult task.


That's all I saw for now. Could you fix those problems up and then post when you've done so? I may have more later, but for right now, I need to leave.

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Post by Alarick on Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:28 pm

I only read the jist of what you typed, but i, meant to add in my app that some of the stuff in my history is what I hope to achieve. With the sunagakure kumogakure mix up that was all my bad I apologize. Also I am apart of suna.

Also with the jutsu's I am not going to acqquire all of the jutsu's I sort of thought you guys could use some of them for the site if you want to. I personally don't like katon jutsu's. I did add some caon jutsu's in the list but that again was my fault, I have dyslexia and well as you can tell it is bad lol. I will get on it however asap :DDD

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Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:55 pm

Oh, alrighty then. I'm actually in the process of making Jutsus now, so maybe I'll take some of your ideas and implement them in the list for everyone.

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Post by Alarick on Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:16 pm

Everything in read is stuff I haven't accomplished yet, Also do you want me to input every single jutsu I have into the jutsu template on the site?

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Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:27 am

Yes, please. And take out the canon Katon jutsus from that list - the rest can be added as Custom Katon jutsus in the Custom Jutsus board.

You can't start with Shadow Clone jutsu - I'm sure you just merely forgot to remove it.

Genin start at E-rank, not D.

The clan techniques should really be posted as a Custom Clan... Complete with clan description and all.

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