Tabito Zakushi

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Tabito Zakushi

Post by Tabito on Fri Dec 28, 2012 2:15 pm

Name: Tabito Zakushi

Nickname: Tabi

Age: 13

Sex: Male

Personality: A loud, arrogant, cocky, confident boy. He likes to eat nice, humble, also a prankster. He stands up for others when they are bullied

Appearance: A tan skinned, brown haired boy, with green eye's. He's 5'7, has a scar over his right eye.

Apparel/Armor: He wears a brown shirt with his clan symbol on it

Weapons: Has twin miny scythe

Ninja Tools: He has 26 kunai and 33 shuriken

History: All his life he was bullied because of his poor chakra control. He ran away to a new village called the Leaf Village. He soon got adopted and waas raised to be a shinobi

Village: Missing Nin

Title: Genin

Rank: C

Element: Lightning

Fighting Style: Ninjutsu, Taijustu

Kekkei Genkai: Rinnegan



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Join date : 2012-12-28

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Re: Tabito Zakushi

Post by Rikuo Namikaze on Wed Jan 02, 2013 1:36 am

Alright a Few things are wrong here First and I'll say this for like the Third Profile in a month NO RINNEGAN it's already taken and were Only allowing one so Sorry. Second Personalty and History Need to be Longer At least one Paragraph for Personalty and at least 3 for your History None of this one Line Crap Fix that stuff and I'll look at it again. Also please use the Code Located at the Bottom of the Charecter Template


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Join date : 2012-03-15
Age : 28

Ninja Info
OOC Name: Rikky
Title: Jounin
Rank: S

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