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Nakikaru, flames of the mist

Post by Raikunagi Nakikaru on Sun Apr 08, 2012 1:12 am

Current leader: Unknown

Description: Nakikaru a clan born in the forest near the hidden mist village. They worship the god-like beast Kirika Ookami (Mist Fire Wolf.) They have the ability to create mist and change it into fire or an explosion. They are a clan of ninjas with powerful ninjutsu but can exceed in taijutsu or genjutsu, depending on the ninja. The Nakikaru don't know the origin of the clan, nor do anybody else. Their only knowledge of the clan origins was destroyed or killed a long time ago.

All of the Nakikaru clan has a right purple eye with a slit pupil and white hair lightly tinted with another color that they subconsciously choose at birth. Due to their kekkei genkai the Nakikaru clan has a strong resistance to heat, if they weren't their jutsu would kill them instantly.

Required elements: Fire, Water

Kekkei Genkai: Flaming Mist

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Current Members: 1/2

1.Raikunagi Nakikaru
2.

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Nakikaru Jutsu

Ninjutsu:

Rank D:

Spoiler:
Burning Mist Jutsu:
Requirements: Water, Fire, must be Nakikaru
Description: Using chakra the user can create a burning heat within his lungs due to the Nakikaru internal flame immunity this does nothing to them. After that they blow out the heated chakra in a mist-like form covering a medium area. The color of this mist is the color of the tint of their hair.

Mist Ignition Jutsu:
requirements: Water, Fire, must be Nakikaru
Description: Activate by using the tiger hand sign. After using burning mist jutsu u can control your chakra and and ignite a section of the mist into fire. The color of the flame is the same as the users hair.

Rank C:

Spoiler:
Searing Mist Jutsu
Requirements: Water, Fire, must be Nakikaru
Description: Using chakra the user can create a burning heat within his lungs due to the Nakikaru internal flame immunity this does nothing to them. After that they blow out the heated chakra in a mist-like form burning everything in it's path. The color of the steam is the same as the users hair color.

Rank B:

Spoiler:
Mist Explosion Jutsu:
Requirements: Water, Fire, must be Nakikaru
Description: Activate by using the hand signs snake, and tiger in this order. After using burning mist jutsu u can control your chakra and make a section of the mist explode in the color of the users hair.

Great Burning Mist Jutsu:
Requirements: Water, Fire, must be Nakikaru
Description: Activate using dog then tiger hind signs. using chakra the user can create a burning heat inside their lungs due to the Nakikaru internal flame immunity this does nothing to them. After that they blow out heated chakra into a giant mist covering a large area. The color of this mist is the color of the tint of their hair.

Rank A:

Spoiler:
Searing Mist Ignition Jutsu
Requirements: Water, Fire, must be Nakikaru
Description: Hand signs: dragon, tiger. Controlling the chakra farther than mist ignition jutsu the user can ignite a large portion of burning mist into searing white flames tinted the same as the users hair.

Mist of Flames Justu:
Requirements: Water, fire, must be Nakikaru
Description: Hand signs: dragon, ox, tiger. Ignite the whole burning mist into fire the color of the tint in the users hair.

Rank S:

Spoiler:
Mist Destruction Jutsu
Requirements: Water, Fire, must be Nakikaru, Ninjutsu major
Description: Hand signs: snake, dragon, tiger. If a Nakikaru cannot control their chakra they should never use this jutsu. Using the whole burning mist body the user can create a searing hot explosion the same color as the users hair.

Genjutsu

Rank C:

Spoiler:
Mist of Deserts Pain
Requirements: Water, fire, must be Nakikaru
Description: Hand signs: tiger. Using chakra the user can create burning within his lungs. After that they blow out the heated chakra in a mist-like form trapping the target along with their senses. They will travel all around the genjutsu thinking the are in a mist as hot as a desert.

Rank A:

Spoiler:
Mist of Searing Pain
Requirements: water, fire, must be Nakikaru
Description: Hand signs: dragon, tiger. Using chakra the user can create searing heat within his lungs. After that they blow out the heated chakra in a mist-like form trapping the target along with their senses. They will travel all around the genjutsu thinking the are in a mist as hot as a white flame. Causes mental and physical pain.


Last edited by Raikunagi nakikaru on Wed Apr 11, 2012 10:41 pm; edited 13 times in total
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Re: Nakikaru, flames of the mist

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Sun Apr 08, 2012 8:58 am

Combination elements like Senju and Yuki clans get two members. Also, I notice a distinct lack of capitalization in your jutsus. Otherwise, cool idea, and it's something that definitely can work.

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Re: Nakikaru, flames of the mist

Post by Raikunagi Nakikaru on Sun Apr 08, 2012 8:43 pm

Finished

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Re: Nakikaru, flames of the mist

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Sun Apr 08, 2012 9:29 pm

You don't have to list the handseals if you don't want to.

I'd like capitals in the descriptions, too.

What does the Mini Mist Fire Wolf (D Rank) do? Is it a messenger-type?

I noticed you could actually just make a contract for your clan summons... But I have to finish Summoning rules and add some Canon contracts first. So hold off on that.

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Re: Nakikaru, flames of the mist

Post by Raikunagi Nakikaru on Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:50 pm

Edited.

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Re: Nakikaru, flames of the mist

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Mon Apr 09, 2012 10:44 am

The length of a Genjutsu cast is in the Genjutsu rules. You don't have to list them.

You have several "Burning Mist" Jutsus that have the same exact descriptions. What sets them apart besides their rank? Their power? Their area of effect? The length of the jutsu? Things like this have to be mentioned.

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Re: Nakikaru, flames of the mist

Post by Raikunagi Nakikaru on Mon Apr 09, 2012 7:43 pm

edited.

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Re: Nakikaru, flames of the mist

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Mon Apr 09, 2012 8:57 pm

So, wait... The clan is immune to fire techs?

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Re: Nakikaru, flames of the mist

Post by Raikunagi Nakikaru on Mon Apr 09, 2012 9:17 pm

not completely I'll edit it.

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Re: Nakikaru, flames of the mist

Post by Raikunagi Nakikaru on Tue Apr 10, 2012 8:45 pm

And now i am done.

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Re: Nakikaru, flames of the mist

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Wed Apr 11, 2012 2:29 am

I don't see there being any Taijutsu logically.

Don't learn the Summoning techs. They should get converted into a Summon Contract when I make some.

Otherwise, pending further Admin approval.

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Post by Raikunagi Nakikaru on Wed Apr 11, 2012 10:49 pm

Edited.

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Post by Raikunagi Nakikaru on Tue Apr 17, 2012 10:07 pm

Edited and revised again. For now it is complete!

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Re: Nakikaru, flames of the mist

Post by Rikuo Namikaze on Tue Apr 24, 2012 3:15 am

I see nothing wrong with this and since Zephy needs a Number two I approve as well.

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