[solved]Vision of Hell (Training)

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[solved]Vision of Hell (Training)

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Tue Mar 27, 2012 10:49 pm

Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique)
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Description: Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.

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Re: [solved]Vision of Hell (Training)

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Fri Mar 30, 2012 1:08 pm

Zephyr awoke like any other day - the sunlight shining onto his eyes. Somehow that scumbag of a star managed to directly hit his eyes without fail every single day. He sighed and then rolled out of bed. He washed and dressed, and looked at his headband in his hands. The metal reflected the image of Zephyr onto it. He stared at himself and sighed again. What was he accomplishing? He felt like something was missing. He was easily defeated by Rikuo in a spar with a lack of speed and taijutsu. Zephyr was never any good at Taijutsu, but he could learn everything *but* Taijutsu...

Beginning with Genjutsu. That was what he was missing, he now only figured now. No Uchiha was perfect without an arsenal of both Ninjutsu and Genjutsu, though they were expected to be good at Taijutsu as well. Overall, only the best was expected from Uchiha, and he felt like he was the worst. Even now, even with the Sharingan, he was still weak. He had to get stronger. Aiko and the rest of the Uchiha in various squads were probably already hard at work perfecting their techniques.

Zephyr groaned at the thought of him being dead-last. He couldn't stand it. He ran downstairs and made sure to get a hearty breakfast.


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Re: [solved]Vision of Hell (Training)

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Fri Mar 30, 2012 1:15 pm

As he was eating, his father walked into the room. He looked at Zeffy oddly.

"You seem oddly energetic," he commented.

Zephyr replied, "Well, I need to learn Genjutsu. I don't know any... So I was thinking of-"

"Genjutsu? I think I know the perfect beginner one... It's called Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu. When you use it successfully, the victim sees a horrible vision - usually its something bad like a close friend laying dead with weapons sticking from their bodies or something, but you are able to choose. It's heartless, but sometimes, you have to be in battle." Zephyr gulped as he went over the description in his mind. It sounded like it would work, at least. He probably wouldn't use it on his friends, because it just sounded pure evil. He was sure if someone used it on him, he would see Aiko dying. He tried to wipe the image from his mind, but the more he tried, the further it imprinted on his mind. That would never happen if Zephyr was there.

Zephyr nodded and said, "I'll learn it." This wasn't just for him now. This was for Aiko and the rest of his friends. His father grinned and motioned to Zeffy to follow him to the backyard. Zephyr quickly downed the rest of his breakfast and ran to catch up with him. Finally, his father was going to help him with something! He was usually away from home, at the council or on missions, so he almost never saw him.


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Re: [solved]Vision of Hell (Training)

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Fri Mar 30, 2012 11:27 pm

As they stepped outside, Zephyr got that familiar feeling of excitement, the rush of combat. Sometimes it appeared, sometimes it did not, but all he knew was that it made him feel almost ecstatic. This wasn't even a battle situation, either, so Zephyr was internally confused as to why he got this feeling now. Maybe it was the preparation for training with his father. His body didn't know what to expect, nor did his mind. He'd never fought his father - he only learned little things about him from other people or from the little tidbits of hints he dropped every few days.

Zephyr took his place in front of his father, several yards away. Wordlessly, his father formed handseals at a breakneak pace. Zephyr didn't even have time to blink before the jutsu was cast on him. His vision became blurred and covered by leafs and flower petals flying about. He spun around, unable to see past the veil. In a few moments, the leafs and flowers settled all around him, and everything had changed...

Into Hell itself. Sounds of metal clanging against metal rang out through the air, fires burned on the fields, the ground a scorched black ash colour, and a smell of sulfur was eminent. Something went wrong here. What was this place? The sky was bleak and gray, as if it was mourning the loss of life in the area. He turned and behind him was a river - however, unlike any river he had never seen, this water was red, from what appeared to be blood.

Zephyr's eyes widened. What the hell was this place? What did his father do to him? This was insane! Where in this world could this kind of place exist? So many questions flooded his mind, and none of them were answered when people blazed past him at unimaginable speeds. These people clashed with others with swords and kunai, slashing at each other and cutting down victims like they were nothing. There was no compassion, no mercy, and most of all, no sorrow. It appeared as though everything was ignoring him, so Zephyr took a fearful step forward, but immediately retracted his foot when he heard a barely-audible feminine voice around him. He recognized it and spun around and nearly passed out from the sight.

It was Aiko lying in a pool of her own blood. Kunai stuck from her body. Tears flooded Zephyr's eyes. All thought of his father left his mind; all he cared about was her at the moment. He rushed over to her body and crouched to her crumpled form, embracing her. He just stared at her eyes slowing fading to a blank stare, her life passing from her body. Zeffy's teardrops sprinkled her body as he sobbed. He laid her head down gently on the ground, and sat down. He slammed his fist onto the ground, and in a flash, his vision blurred once more with petals and leaves flying in the air.

In a few moments, he was once again with his father. Zeffy was now in a kneeling position, tears in his eyes, looking down at the ground. His father tutted, but thought to himself, Maybe I went too hard on him... Zephyr looked up at him, and wiped away his tears with his arm.

"What the hell was that for?!" he screamed at him. He'd never used language like that, but he was almost consumed by rage. Zephyr just now figured out that this was a genjutsu, that genjutsu he was talking about. How could his father do that to him?

His father sighed and replied, "You have to experience it to understand it. You're an Uchiha, so eventually, Genjutsu will have no place against you, but it is still useful to have the experience of having been trapped in a Genjutsu when you use them. That kind of pain that you felt, that is what you are pushing onto your opponent. You can't be a shinobi if you can't push your emotions aside to do what you must for your country. Now, are you still ready to learn?" Zephyr struggled to raise himself from his knees. He looked up at his father, glaring with his pitch black eyes. Oh, he was ready. There was no way that was ever going to happen to Aiko... That vision would not be a premonition.

He nodded, and his father smiled. "Good..."


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Re: [solved]Vision of Hell (Training)

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Sat Mar 31, 2012 10:55 pm

Zephyr stood glaring at his father. His father nodded and then began a long speech on the theory of genjutsu.

"Genjutsu works unlike both Ninjutsu and Taijutsu. It uses handseals - sometimes - but more importantly uses precise chakra control. You do not use the chakra to form an attack, nor do you use it to power anything up. You use it instead to disrupt the flow of chakra or neurons in your opponent's body or nervous system. This affects their five senses, and when you control those, you practically control them. You can make an opponent think they are on fire, or you can think they are walking towards an object when really they are walking in circles, or off of a cliff." He paused to let Zephyr absorb the information. Zephyr immediately understood with his good memory and fast learning, and nodded.

His father continued, "So you can see why it is useful for shinobi to have Genjutsu in their arsenal. Our clan are the masters of Genjutsu and Ninjutsu, and as such, you are expected to be profoundly excellent in them. I'll teach you how to do this one Genjutsu, but the rest you must learn on your own." Zephyr frowned at the notion of his father only helping him a little bit. However, he decided that a little bit was more than he had done in the past, so he nodded reluctantly.

"To perform a Genjutsu, you form your handseal, and then focus your chakra in your body. When you are ready, you expell the chakra and force it onto your opponent with the force to disrupt their senses. They usually don't notice until its too late - when they are entrapped in your technique. I'll show you Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu." Zephyr blinked and flickered on his Sharingan to better understand the workings of the jutsu. Even with it, he expected to have to train for a long time to be able to master the technique. His father looked at him and just smiled, then closed his eyes. He turned to face the fence of their backyard and then formed a ram handseal.

He opened his eyes again and muttered, "Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique." Zephyr noted his change in chakra flow. The Sharingan understood the workings of the jutsu, but it was up to Zephyr to translate it into actual actions. His father pushed his chakra towards the wall and harmlessly knocked against it. His father turned to him.

"I used only a little bit of chakra there, but you should have seen what I did. Replicate that with enough chakra to break into your enemy's mind. I should tell you, this jutsu works on anything with a Prosencephalon structure in the brain, so humans, cats, dogs, and pretty much most animals will be affected by this. Insects, on the other hand, most likely will not, because their brains don't have that part. I'll see you later, then." He waved and then walked inside, leaving Zephyr to just stand on the grass of his backyard.

Zeffy sighed, and then closed his eyes, forming the handseal in his hands. This was going to take a long time...


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Re: [solved]Vision of Hell (Training)

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Sat Mar 31, 2012 11:55 pm

Zephyr focused on his chakra alone. He would have to take this one step at a time. He had to channel it properly and evenly in his own body, but at the same time, have it be able to be moved out of his body. He focused on the swirl, the flow of his chakra. His eyes closed, he imagined his body like a sphere. Streaks of blue spun around in a ring inside the sphere. Zephyr smiled, and then opened his eyes again. That was simple enough, however, the second part would be more difficult.

He decided he should practice it on his own first, and then get a test target. He focused on the chakra sphere, and then all at once, pushed his chakra to one specific point to burst the sphere. Unfortunately, his chakra wasn't strong enough to break the cage of his body, so it just wobbled back into the normal chakra path. Zephyr sighed. This was going to be a long day...

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Re: [solved]Vision of Hell (Training)

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:22 am

After much struggling and sweat, Zephyr finally managed to be able to push his chakra from his body in a controlled burst without much effort. This feat alone took him almost the entire night. He passed out on the lawn soon after.

When he came to, Zephyr found a plate with his breakfast on it, and an encouraging note from his mother. He grinned and wolfed down his meal, thankful for his mom caring about his training, even when she was as busy as she was. He quickly walked out of the side gate, dusting off his clothes that were green and brown from the grass and dirt he had slept on.

He found his test victim in only a few moments. A stray, mangy cat with no collar on it was perfect. Zephyr formed his handseal and then focused his chakra. He then burst it out, directly at the cat. He then waited... And waited...

Nothing happened. The cat yawned and then scratched its back. What was he doing wrong? His father didn't really explain the jutsu more than that... How the heck did the jutsu actually work? Zephyr let out a "Grr" of anger, scaring the cat away. Zephyr then sat down and thought to himself. Okay, so maybe the victim had to be looking at him... Or he had to put more chakra into it. He would just do both of them.

Zephyr went to work finding a new victim - a stray dog this time. He pinned it in an area and sat down, continuously trying the jutsu on it without success, until...

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Re: [solved]Vision of Hell (Training)

Post by Zephyr Uchiha on Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:25 am

"Arrooogh!" The dog yelped, in imaginary pain. Zephyr opened his eyes, and released his handseal. The dog immediately stopped flailing about on the ground, and stared at him with the glare of the devil. It wanted vengeance for what he did to him. Zephyr immediately high-tailed it out of the pen, but when he was out, he pumped his fist in the air in joy. He nailed the jutsu, and it only took him two days! He was so proud of himself, that he ran off to find Aiko to tell her... Also, he could check up on her progress..


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Re: [solved]Vision of Hell (Training)

Post by Rikuo Namikaze on Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:27 am

Alright Approved Jutsu added and 5 RTP gained.

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