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Post by Alarick Tue Feb 14, 2012 10:26 pm

Name: Alarick Kikemone
Nickname: Ala-kun, Ala, Ricky
Age: 12
Sex: Male

Village: Sunagakure no Sato
Title: Genin
Rank: D
Element: Fire/Earth
Fighting Style: Ninjutsu Major, taijutsu minor


Personality:
Due to him being completely mute, as in can not speak, he has developed the since of kindness, confusion, and lost-train-of-thought. For some it is hard to think how could anyone have a personality if they can not speak, well Alarick is the perfect example of that. Him being mute has not changed the fact that he is a lovable, cool person. He can always brighten the mood and he is definitely a team player, he will always take one for the team even if it doesn't make sense half the time.

Growing up, Alarick was centered around something most people have and others need, peace. His whole life was peaceful up till the day where he lost his voice. Even then he still managed to at least keep some of the peace in his life still alive. That proves that Alarick can't be so easily broken.



Appearance:

Spoiler:
(Underneathe his uniform)
Alarick has his signature hair style known as the 'M' shaped bangs. basically all it is, is one long bunch of hair on either side of his face with a medium sized bunch of hair dangling down his face tickling his nose. His eye's are purple yet they are intimidating, whenever someone looks into them, they get a cold chill, depending on the person authority level and class rank. He wears this black jacket unzipped with a light burgundy T-shirt underneath. He wears white skinny jean pants with the annual Naruto Black Sandals on his feet.

Apparel/Armour:
Alarick wears the Suna no Sato vest, but other than that, everything on his person is completely his own.

Weapon(s):


Ninja Tools:
Glass Shards-Unlimited Supply



History:

Is it time Already

The boy named as Alarick, was cursed from the start. Well thats what many thought. being born mute would make some peoples life a living hell. Its a cold barren world out there for those with disabilities, but Alarick wouldn't let the nefarious thoughts of such blunt people bring him down. He is far better than that. but being born on the day of a hazardous lightning/thunderstorm made it seem that it was that which took his sound from him, His voice. The screeching of the lighting as it stabbed the ground, and the roar of the thunder as it shook the earth, and then the yelping of the mother in pain as she was giving birth to her second born child. Too many noises all happening at once, and it was all being drained from Alarick as he exited the womb.When he did exit, he was silent. Breathing but silent. The doctors spanked the baby as standard procedure to make him cry, but nothing, it was like he wanted to cry, but even a simple whimper couldn't be made from his voice. It was like he had no voice at all...but then again, he didn't.

Year after year he was cursed with the disability of being mute. How on earth would he ever become a ninja if he can't even speak. How could anything be done in his life if he couldn't give proper direction verbally. Some of these things are better left undone, but that is not how alarick wanted it. He wanted people to look up to him in the village of the sand. he wanted everyone to see his true potential. He wanted to become Raikage. He thought that would be the only way for people to stop treating him like a kid. maybe it would work, or maybe it wouldn't, either way he would not know until....unless he tries to at least.

He went on through the days of the ninja academy. Perfecting his Ninjutsu skills to there ultimate limit. His father promised him that once he became a Genin he will start teaching him the Kikomone Clan's Jutsu's. Did I not mention that before, if I hadn't one thing you need to know is that Alarick is apart of a clan that is famous and world renown for there Glass jutsu's. That was one of the things Alarick wanted to learn the most. The glass jutsu's were extremely powerful. Powerful beyond explanation, not only powerful, but rare as well. not like rare like never seen before but rare like, only a few people have actually learned all of the jutsu's the clan has to offer.

It was then at that very moment when Alarick was finally seeing some light at the end of the tunnel. He was the youngest person on record so far to graduate from the ninja academy. He Graduated at seven years of age, which was the most impressively outstanding since the worlds 2nd most dangerous ninja war. It was clear alarick knew what he was doing as he excelled on to the rank of a Genin with out even taking a seconds breath on the fact that he just became a genin and graduated from the academy.

Love is not always Loyal
It was then when life began to take the toll that Alarick wanted it to. Alarick being a genin and all people still looked down upon him as a kid, a child, some thought of him as a nuisance but still, Alarick still had joy. He would prove to everyone what this mute kid can do when that particular time comes when everyone will need his help, or when the time comes for him to be promoted to kazekage, which ever comes first. But that still doesn't matter because he will wow the people no matter what they think of him.

During his years as a Genin, even though the years seemed short for him because he was soon to be a chuunin, he has mastered and learned a great fraction of the clans jutsu's at an exceptional rate, which indeed was one of the best things that could ever happen to him. but then there is that moment in a persons life were they feel as if they really didn't fulfill anything at all. Even though Alarick was just eight he was feeling that same feeling. But as always he managed to pull through for the better, and just like that he did. He went through the chuunin exams hosted in the Leaf village like it was nothing with his team and everything. They were definitely a force unworthy of fighting because of there strengths.

Just months after the exams started, the results were in and Alarick, along with the rest of his team were promoted to Chuunin, no if's and's or but's and definitely no questions asked. It was just simple years for the boy who couldn't even cry wolf. What glory, bestowed deep within the boys soul as he continued on his journey to become stronger, and strive to become Raikage. But first things first, he would have to prove himself worthy. He was not only known as the mute boy, but he was also known as the one who didn't have kenjutsu as a specialty. At first it never occurred to him. Nearly everyone in Suna was a specialist at the traditional sword fighting, but really to be honest, that did not seem to entertain Alarick in the slightest, it actually made some of his thoughts dull toward the thought of being forced to have kenjutsu as a specialty.

I wouldn't exactly say he was looked down upon now, I mean after all of those years look what he has come to be. Just looking back for a brief moment you would see, that Alarick has graduated the ninja academy at age five, and then passed the chuunin exams at age six. The youngest to do so in many, many years, and plus he now has mastered almost every single jutsu his clan has was something worth bragging about, but he didn't like the bragging part about it. He was just in it so he can completely fulfill his dream, and make his life better than were it already was. his love for conquest and joy flooded his dreams making him Jounin.


Rp Sample:

Akikake, originally Calista Petrakis, was born in the northern region of the Roman Empire. Her father, Petros, had fallen in love with a foreign woman. His family never made an effort to hide their displeasure with the choice. Their prized son, who had served many years in the Roman military, had essentially betrayed his parents. Now that he had impregnated a low-class begger, there was no chance to advance in the society ladder. However, after the two married, the family welcomed them with open arms. They needed their son, and they were going to get everything they could out of him. By the time Calista was born, some of the tension had disappeared. Her grandparents would be seen holding back a smile as they held her in their arms. Often times, her grandmother was found lounging, sewing and singing as Calista and her mother swayed to the music. Other relatives found her cheerful innocence contagious, that very thing doing much to sooth the family's hardened heart.

Not everyone in the household was enjoying the new additions, however. When Petros and his wife was accepted back into the family circle, his older brother, Kleitos, had been pushed to the background. Being able to only look on as his brother took his place as the one to continue the family line...the position that had been rightfully his. The position that had been cruelly taken away from him by one enemy sword. The bitter feeling only grew when another child was born, this time it was a son.

And just like that, Kleitos' status as the "lesser" son solidified.

The only person who knew of his anger and resentment was Calista's mother. She knew of the elder brother's feelings of hatred, and because of this, she feared for her family's life. She ran to her husband, telling him of her worries and of how Kleitos meant them harm. Petros only laughed and thought her delusional. He never thought that at that moment, his brother was pacing the length of his bedroom, plotting his next action. He knew that now that the woman had gone and warned his brother, something had to be done. So, that night he snuck into Petros' room and killed both him and his wife. With the same blade, Kleitos then had no trouble killing the newborn son. As he ran from the murders, he kidnapped the young Calista, heading for the Imperial City of Rome.

There, Calista was sold to a wealthy man, and never saw her uncle again. Her owner, Gaius, was a kind, older man who owned a brothel. His wife had died long ago, and all his children has either married and moved or had died in battles. So, while he had her doing the housework and the cooking, he treated her kindly, and viewed her as his own daughter. However, he failed to mention that that kindness would only last until she grew old enough to develop her curves. Without telling her beforehand, he sold her to a drunk for a high price. Was it any surprise, then, that she knifed the stranger when he tried to take off her clothes?

The incident caused an uproar throughout Rome. Not only was a paying customer killed in a brothel, but a Calista was a female slave with no Roman citizenship. Yet, while others shouted for retribution for the hideous crime that was committed, Gaius saw a chance for profit. He proposed after a week of training with his top gladiator, that she be paired against another woman gladiator for a show. The idea intrigued the people, and she was sent to training.

The week passed fairly quickly, and the day of the fight came. Hundreds of Romans filled the arena, shouting, arguing, and jostling each other for a better view. The two fighters stepped out, and that was when Calista first saw her opponent. A woman only a few years older than herself, holding a broadsword and a large shield. Once the fight started, it didn't last long. With two strides of her long legs, the other woman, batted aside Calista's attempt to cut her, and her broadsword went straight through Calista's stomach. The older woman smirked and then coughed. However, when she saw something red land on other's shirt, she realized something wasn't right. The girl's face featured a grin that stretched from ear to ear. Not even the blood dripping out of her mouth lessened the fear that spread through her. She looked down at her chest, and just stared at it. Pulling her sword out of the older woman's chest, the world spun, and Calista found herself lying on the ground. She didn't even have the strength to remove the sword in her stomach. Yet, she felt a sense of satisfaction. Somehow, she had won.


Jutsu:
•Water Walking Jutsu (D)

•Rope Escape (D)

•Shadow Clone Jutsu (B)






Glass Jutsu's Gaton


Spoiler:

Katon Jutsu List(For Later use and please look over the list if you may)

Spoiler:

Kekkei Genkai:
This clan has the Gaton Release. Gaton is Glass and can not be copied by the Sharingan, and also it can counter act the Byakugan by making the user of the Byakugan see multiple images of themselves if they where to activate it or look at the ninja if he or she used their mirror armor. Also, beginners of this clan have to have a bag of glass shards with them, or else they can't use any of there jutsu's, but if you are and expert or foresay mastered the clans jutsu's then you can form glass out of thin air.


OOC Info:
My OOC username is Alarick.
You can contact me by email.
I found the site by searching the catacombs of forumotion.




Last edited by Alarick on Thu Feb 16, 2012 3:47 pm; edited 2 times in total

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Post by Zephyr Uchiha Wed Feb 15, 2012 7:53 pm

I wasn't really prepared for anyone to actually sign up yet, but I'll check over it and tell you what I see is up with it, I suppose.

Sunagakure is the Sand Village - yet in your Bio you wrote that he is a Cloud ninja. Are you a Sand or a Cloud shinobi?

Jounin start at B rank, by the by. Also, Custom characters start at Genin. Sorry, it's just how the site goes.

Sannin isn't an actual rank. In the show, it was just a title given to the three youngsters (Tsunade, Jiraiya, and Orochimaru) that put up a good fight against the Raikage(?). It's not in any other village, and the title Sannin won't have any place on this site, really.

Your clan would have to first be approved by an application (that is not posted yet - sorry, we're working on getting everything up) in the Custom Clans board, but preliminary reports say that it won't be approved. Can nothing counter it?

The jutsus - without putting much thought into powerfulness - seem fine-ish at the moment. I saw quite a few of those Katon jutsus, and they're already on the list to get put onto the generic lists for Katons. Please take out the canon jutsus from that list, and maybe you'll be able to submit the custom ones later for approval. Also, that's a ton of high-powered jutsus that only you're able to use, even though it seems like anyone else could use them if they had an affinity for the Fire element. ALSO: FIVE S-ranked jutsus? Geez man, I was thinking that people could only have a few S-ranked. You should probably take some of them out; not that I want to limit your creativity, it's just that S-ranked jutsus are rare, powerful, and hard to learn. Knowing 5 would be a difficult task.


That's all I saw for now. Could you fix those problems up and then post when you've done so? I may have more later, but for right now, I need to leave.
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Post by Alarick Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:28 pm

I only read the jist of what you typed, but i, meant to add in my app that some of the stuff in my history is what I hope to achieve. With the sunagakure kumogakure mix up that was all my bad I apologize. Also I am apart of suna.

Also with the jutsu's I am not going to acqquire all of the jutsu's I sort of thought you guys could use some of them for the site if you want to. I personally don't like katon jutsu's. I did add some caon jutsu's in the list but that again was my fault, I have dyslexia and well as you can tell it is bad lol. I will get on it however asap :DDD

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Post by Zephyr Uchiha Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:55 pm

Oh, alrighty then. I'm actually in the process of making Jutsus now, so maybe I'll take some of your ideas and implement them in the list for everyone.
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Post by Alarick Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:16 pm

Everything in read is stuff I haven't accomplished yet, Also do you want me to input every single jutsu I have into the jutsu template on the site?

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Post by Zephyr Uchiha Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:27 am

Yes, please. And take out the canon Katon jutsus from that list - the rest can be added as Custom Katon jutsus in the Custom Jutsus board.

You can't start with Shadow Clone jutsu - I'm sure you just merely forgot to remove it.

Genin start at E-rank, not D.

The clan techniques should really be posted as a Custom Clan... Complete with clan description and all.
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